The use of technology in today's world is outrageous, people are always looking at a screen whether it's looking at a t.v screen, cell phone, computer, ect. Technology hasn't always been a problem, kids now have electronics at a young age, overusing them and not paying attention to the outdoors. I feel that people live in a world that revolves around technology, people are always checking about how man likes that got or checking for funny memes or trying to get another victory royal in fortnite. Technology is being over used more and more everyday and we need to start limiting the amount of time spent looking at a screen to stay more healthy and happy.
Too much screen time is harmful to kids at a young age, always being on your electric is not healthy for your brain. According to the CBS.news, Eye strain from hours of screen time can result in eye irritation, dryness, fatigue or blurred vision, and such problems are increasingly common, according to a new report. The fact is, kids are always looking at their cell phones, therefore they are constantly playing a game or scrolling through social media. Parents need to set time limits for the amount of screen time their child gets a day, this will allow kids to spend time doing other things and be a lot more healthy for their eyes and brain. At home kids are always on electronics which is taking away from spending time with family or finishing their homework assignment. Not spending time with your family can cause you to feel lonely or just might make you depressed. The amount of time you spend on your electronic device could be time spent doing something more productive , like cleaning your room or getting all your school work done. The time U.S. users are spending in mobile apps is continuing to grow; according to new firm Flurry, they are up to 5 hours per day on mobile devices. from news from January that said the time spent in mobile apps had increased 69 percent year-over-year. Electronics are hard to get away from in today's world, we use and see them everywhere we go, Like in in school, restaurants, sporting events, and at home. Students are always looking at their computer screens whether it's doing math homework or writing a essay. Technology is also providing kids with more information which is making them smarter. Being able to see what is constantly going on in the world is making the kids smarter everyday, according to huff post, There’s no doubt that kids are getting smarter than ever before. Exam results are constantly climbing around the world, and a greater amount of people possess higher education qualifications than ever before. That alone should demonstrate how the world is growing smarter. Looking at your cell phone screen for multiple hours everyday is not healthy for you and there needs to be a limit on the amount of time you spend looking a your phone. Research shows that technology is harmful to kids If they are constantly looking at their screens. I think people need to start getting more active instead of always looking at their phones , like going outside and shooting a basketball or reading a book, or just talking to your family or friends. I believe our phones and electronics are harmful to our body's both physically and mentally, taking away from what's really important in life, your health.
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Micah Beauregard
3/28/2018 08:35:45 am
I agree with you that kids are on their phones to much and that we should limit it.
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Breanna
3/28/2018 08:36:36 am
I like how you use "Fort night."Also I like how you use statistics that can be easily found.
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anonymous
3/28/2018 08:36:47 am
I like your stance. It's clearly stated.
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Taylor
3/28/2018 08:37:27 am
I like how you used examples when you talked about younger kids being on their phones so much.
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Sylvia Whitt
3/28/2018 08:37:37 am
You have really good reasons and explain them very well, screens definitely are taking over our world.
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Jordan
3/28/2018 08:38:10 am
I like the facts you used to back up your side.
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Anna Schlaff
3/28/2018 08:38:30 am
You have really good statistics and evidence to back up your reasons!
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Jakkpat
3/28/2018 08:38:37 am
I agree use phone to much is not good
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Anonymous
3/28/2018 08:39:15 am
Strong Argument. Good Word Choice. I like how you gave resolutions to the problem.
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